The Alarm Traitor

Tim BartowTim BartowCinematic (Live Action)MiniMax H3 Max1 scene1 shot0:06Oct 3, 2026

The film

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Storyboard

1 scene · 1 shot

Scene 1

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  • Shot 1 · wide · 6s

    In the warm, cluttered bedroom on moving morning, Jimmy tries to intimidate the alarm clock into silence. The room's unfinished boxes and wheelchair make his ordinary irritation feel like one more thing he cannot control.

    • Jimmy Carlisle: Don't you dare.
    • Jimmy Carlisle: Traitor.

The story

Written by Tim Bartow

Original input — click to expand

“## Shot 1: Jimmy's room, morning **Paste-ready prompt:** > Single-camera teen family comedy, bright warm morning light, shallow depth of field, handheld mockumentary feel, saturated colors, 24fps, 16:9. > > Interior of a boy's bedroom in a Kansas suburban house, morning. Half-unpacked cardboard moving boxes are stacked around the room, labeled in three different messy handwritings: "KITCHEN," "JIMMY - DO NOT DROP," and "GLASS??". A Texas flag is taped crooked on the wall above the bed. Next to the bed sits a black-and-yellow wheelchair with glitter wheels. > > JIMMY CARLISLE, 14, brown hair, handsome, sharp-eyed, is lying in bed in pajamas, glaring at a small digital alarm clock on the nightstand as if it personally wronged him. Slow push-in on his deadpan face. He mutters, "Don't you dare." The alarm goes off anyway with a loud beep, and he lets his head fall back on the pillow in defeat. He mutters, "Traitor." > > Tone: dry, deadpan, comedic timing. Audio: quiet morning room tone, then the alarm beep. Duration: 8 seconds. **Dialogue (for separate voice or lip-sync, if your tool needs it):** Jimmy: "Don't you dare." *(alarm beeps)* "Traitor."”

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