@Isis and @Malachi: Final Hours
The film
Storyboard
Scene 1
2 shots · 24sShot 1 · over-shoulder · 11s
Isis tests whether Ash could have harmed Denise. Malachi rejects the possibility, but Isis keeps pressing him for details.
- @Isis: DO YOU EVER THINK ASH....TRY HURT DENISE?
- @Malachi: NEVER HURT HER THAT'S NOT LOVE
- @Isis: SAY ANYTHING ABOUT DENISE
Shot 2 · medium close-up · 13s
Malachi recalls sharing a laugh with Ash. Under Isis's questioning, he reveals that Ash handed him a drink on a bench.
- @Malachi: ASH CAUGHT HIMSELF LITTLE BIT START LAUGHING I LAUGHED WITH HIM DIDN'T KNOW
- @Isis: ASH DO ANYTHING
- @Malachi: ON THE BENCH ASH HANDED A DRINK
Scene 2
1 shot · 8sShot 3 · medium · 8s
At the park bench, @Ash Carter hands @Malachi the drink that will later connect the lure, Jahsani, and Denise.
Scene 3
2 shots · 18sShot 4 · reaction · 12s
Isis recognizes the significance of the drink and freezes. Malachi notices her distress as she forces him to repeat what happened.
- @Isis: .........KIND OF DRINK
- @Malachi: ........YOU OKAY
- @Isis: ...................YOU SAID
- @Malachi: I HAD A DRINK
- @Isis: WHAT DRINK AGAIN
- @Malachi: I S-
Shot 5 · medium close-up · 6s
Isis stops Malachi's answer and commits to revealing what she knows. He accepts, waiting for her disclosure.
- @Isis: .....................I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING
- @Malachi: UH.....OKAY......
Scene 4
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Shot 6 · over-shoulder · 14s
Isis makes Malachi revisit the drink Ash gave him. She connects it to another drunken night involving the same drink in Chicago.
- @Isis: ...REMEMBER THE DRINK ASH GIVEN YOU
- @Malachi: YEAH, I DO
- @Isis: THE DRINK HANDED TO YOU THE SAME DRINK HE HAD ONE NIGHT FROM CHICAGO, MORE DRUNK
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Shot 7 · medium close-up · 13s
Malachi tries to interrupt, but Isis keeps him focused on the drink. She reveals that a woman prepared the same mixture.
- @Malachi: WHAT H-
- @Isis: NOT THE STORY
- @Malachi: WHAT DOES THAT MEAN AGAIN
- @Isis: THAT WOMAN HAD FIXED THE SAME DRINK
- @Malachi: ........MEANING
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Shot 8 · close-up · 7s
Isis names the exact mixture. Malachi's memory hardens into evidence of a repeated setup.
- @Isis: ALCOHOLIC COFFEE SEAGRAM'S ESCAPES SPIKED X PINEAPPLE
Scene 5
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Shot 9 · close-up · 12s
The lure takes hold: @Malachi sweats, his head spins ten times worse, and he fights to remain upright while @Isis tries to keep him conscious.
- @Malachi: WHAT'S HAPPENING ON HEA
- @Isis: ..MALACHI..HELLO!?
- @Isis: ......S***🤬WAKE UP!
- @Malachi: ............I'M HEA
- @Isis: ARE YOU ALRIGHT!?
- @Malachi: CONTINUE
- @Isis: HAPPEN TO YOU!?!?
- @Malachi: IDK AH-S**🤬
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Shot 10 · reaction · 12s
As Malachi's focus clears, he demands the drug's identity. Isis nearly answers before recognition strikes and leaves her unable to respond.
- @Isis: D-..........
- @Malachi: WHAT DRUGS
- @Isis: REALLY WANNA K-
- @Malachi: TELL ME
- @Isis: MYSTERY W-
- @Isis: OH GOD, S***🤬
- @Malachi: WHAT IS IT!?
- @Isis: ...................................
- @Malachi: YO.............YO!?
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Shot 11 · medium close-up · 5s
Isis remains trapped in shocked silence. Malachi reaches toward her as she folds inward and begins to cry.
- @Isis: ....................................
- @Malachi: ISIS! ISIS! ISIS!
Scene 6
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Shot 12 · medium · 12s
Isis cries out Jahsani's name and rejects Malachi's attempt to steady her breathing. She then connects Jahsani to the same pill used on Denise during her pregnancy.
- @Isis: NOOOOO, JAHSANI
- @Malachi: BREATHE-1..2-
- @Isis: STOP! I'M GOOD
- @Malachi: NO BULL🤬
- @Isis: SAME PILL THAT J-
- @Malachi: BY WHO!?!
- @Isis: J-JAHSANI
- @Malachi: SERIOUSLY?!?
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Shot 13 · medium close-up · 5s
Isis confirms that the revelation is true. She forces herself to hold Malachi's disbelieving gaze.
- @Isis: NO, NOT KIDDING
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Shot 14 · over-shoulder · 14s
Malachi realizes Ash also spiked his drink. Isis confirms the conspiracy extends further and reveals how Denise's nightmares were used in Osiris's ritual.
- @Malachi: ASH CARTER SPIKED MY DRINK TOO!?!
- @Isis: THERE'S MORE
- @Malachi: HOW!?!
- @Isis: STAYED BY ME FAST FOWARD USING DENISE'S NIGHTMARES FOR OSIRIS TO FINISH THE RITUAL
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Shot 15 · medium close-up · 5s
The cost of the ritual lands on Malachi. He rises halfway from the sofa while Isis can offer only silence.
- @Malachi: NIGHTMARE!?!
- @Isis: ..........................
Scene 7
1 shot · 10s- Not rendered yet
Shot 16 · medium · 10s
@Malachi cannot bear what happened to Denise, but he calms himself and listens because she matters to him more than anything.
The story
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“TO BE CONTINUED.............. FINAL HOURS....................... ISIS CAUGHT, SOFT SPOT FOR HER SISTER DENISE WHO STILL LOVED ASH CARTER ORCHESTRATED LURE MALACHI BACK INTO JAHSANI'S LIFE AT ONCE. ISIS:"DO YOU EVER THINK ASH....TRY HURT DENISE?". MALACHI:"NEVER HURT HER THAT'S NOT LOVE". ISIS:"SAY ANYTHING ABOUT DENISE". MALACHI:"ASH CAUGHT HIMSELF LITTLE BIT START LAUGHING I LAUGHED WITH HIM DIDN'T KNOW ". ISIS:"ASH DO ANYTHING". MALACHI:"ON THE BENCH ASH HANDED A DRINK". ISIS KNEW KIND OF DRINK MALACHI HAD SHE FROZE. ISIS:".........KIND OF DRINK". MALACHI:"........YOU OKAY". ISIS:"...................YOU SAID". MALACHI:"I HAD A DRINK". ISIS:"WHAT DRINK AGAIN". MALACHI:"I S-". ISIS DECIDES TO TELL ANOTHER HIDDEN TRUTH. ISIS:".....................I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING". MALACHI:"UH.....OKAY......". ISIS:"...REMEMBER THE DRINK ASH GIVEN YOU". MALACHI:"YEAH, I DO". ISIS:"THE DRINK HANDED TO YOU THE SAME DRINK HE HAD ONE NIGHT FROM CHICAGO, MORE DRUNK". MALACHI:"WHAT H-". ISIS:"NOT THE STORY". MALACHI:"WHAT DOES THAT MEAN AGAIN". ISIS:"THAT WOMAN HAD FIXED THE SAME DRINK". MALACHI:"........MEANING". ISIS:"ALCOHOLIC COFFEE SEAGRAM'S ESCAPES SPIKED X PINEAPPLE". MALACHI SWEATING HEAD SPINNING TEN TIMES WORSER THAN. MALACHI:"WHAT'S HAPPENING ON HEA". ISIS:"..MALACHI..HELLO!?". MALACHI'S EYES ROLLED IN THE BACK OF HIS HEAD FOUGHT BACK HE SAT UP. ISIS:"......S***🤬WAKE UP!". MALACHI:"............I'M HEA". ISIS:"ARE YOU ALRIGHT!?". MALACHI:"CONTINUE". ISIS:"HAPPEN TO YOU!?!?". MALACHI:"IDK AH-S**🤬". MALACHI'S HEAD STOP SPINNING UNDER THE SPELL TO LURE HIM BACK. ISIS:"D-..........". MALACHI:"WHAT DRUGS". ISIS:"REALLY WANNA K-". MALACHI:"TELL ME". ISIS:"MYSTERY W-". BEFORE ISIS COULD TELL MALACHI SHE FIGURED IT OUT THE WOMAN'S NAME INSIDE ISIS HEAD PANIC. ISIS:"OH GOD, S***🤬". MALACHI:"WHAT IS IT!?". ISIS:"...................................". MALACHI:"YO.............YO!?". ISIS:"....................................". MALACHI:"ISIS! ISIS! ISIS!". ISIS CRIED WHO WAS IT! 12 YEARS! MALACHI TRIED TO CALM HER DOWN. ISIS:"NOOOOO, JAHSANI". MALACHI:"BREATHE-1..2-". ISIS:"STOP! I'M GOOD". SAME PILL MALACHI KO'D DENISE NINE MONTHS PREGNANT MONTHS AGO. MALACHI:"NO BULL🤬". ISIS:"SAME PILL THAT J-". MALACHI:"BY WHO!?!". ISIS:"J-JAHSANI". MALACHI:"SERIOUSLY?!?". ISIS:"NO, NOT KIDDING". MALACHI:"ASH CARTER SPIKED MY DRINK TOO!?!". ISIS:"THERE'S MORE". MALACHI:"HOW!?!". ISIS:"STAYED BY ME FAST FOWARD USING DENISE'S NIGHTMARES FOR OSIRIS TO FINISH THE RITUAL". MALACHI IN HIS FEELINGS ABOUT DENISE FREAKED OUT COULDN'T TAKE IT. MALACHI:"NIGHTMARE!?!". ISIS:"..........................". MALACHI CALMED DOWN LISTENED DENISE WAS IMPORTANT LOVED HER MORE THAN ANYTHING.”
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